ext_290281 ([identity profile] bemocked.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] moominmolly 2006-06-16 08:07 am (UTC)

not only does it not rhyme - which is tolerable, BUT what is troubling for me in trying to recite the modified version is that the number of syllables is off, which throws off the rhythm/meter awfully.
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